Revised Planning for Draft 3

For our draft 3, we wanted to primarily focus on the build up of cinematic shots and the preparation of the tools, so that suspense was built up for the audience which then lead to a climax. We also decided to change our sub-genre from slasher to madness & paranoia as we believed that the dentist should be shown to be more sinister and more meticulous which represented this sub-genre better.

by Luca

Revised Timeline

Revised Storyboards

Revised Font

We decided to use the text below as we believed that the font represented the professionalism of the dentist but was also quite sinister. We also thought that the colours of red and black represented the blood aspect of our OTS.

Revised Script

Revised Music and Foley

For our third draft, we will be changing the music again. We have decided to avoid the opera music as we feel it is very difficult to make it scary. So, therefore we will be using new horror music, that will be provided by AudioNetwork.com. The song is called 'Throne of Blood'

For our foley, we will be using a scratching sound by scraping the tool along the surgery floor. This will create the sound needed for when the dentist pulls his mask.