Mock Contents Pages

I particularly like the font and colours combined with eachother in this piece, the pink, purple and white fonts compliment each other nicely, However I am not happy with the layout and am aware the subject blocks some of the text, I think that I need to have a picture for a background because it gives the image more detail, instead of having a bland grey background. I also placed the musical note that I created however it doesn't really accomplish much and doesn't give any extra effect.

What I like about this is the font, it really stands out even with white on white because of the bold black outline, I also like the contrast between white, red and blue, however again the layout is not very good because it isn't very engaging, also the subject doesn't play much of a purpose kind of awkwardly placed onto the side, I would have to change this to something more major or make him smaller and less stand out, also because of the dark background the model does not contrast well with the overall image meaning I would have to darken the subject in Photoshop to get a better blend of colours.

I particularly like how in this contents page the model contrasts with heading to create the O. I like this because the piece becomes conjoined which doesn't make the subject seem out of place or awkward however, I am still not pleased with the layout of the contents because it still feels clunky so that a viewer would struggle to navigate through the page, I feel like I may have to change the way I structure the page (and number) layout to flow more nicely.