of the rough cut
As a whole, the title sequence has been somewhat successful in conveying the events taking place. The order of shots are cohesive and the same as planned. However, our plot changes have been unsuccessful. We also need to ensure our choice of sound is fits the footage.
Quality of camera work
Variety of shot types
Use of lighting
The lighting in the rough cut is adequate in the beginning of the footage but we will need to re-shoot footage shot in the evening to improve lighting.
The camera was used well. All shots were seamless and steady.
We used a range of establishing , medium and close -up shots.
Characters' performance
Use of
The acting in the rough cut was believable. However, to appeal to a wide audience, our actors will need to tailor their speech to be more acceptable and understandable.
Mise en scene in the rough cut was appropriate. We chose a range of locations that fit the genre and the plot. We managed to acquire most of the initial props we wanted, which can be seen in the rough cut.