Specific Audience Feedback on Ancillary Work
When I showed my colleagues my Ancillary work they gave me some harsh feedback
- The title doesn't suit
- Change the black font on the back cover
- The inside looks boring, put something in it
- The Advertisement looks unrealistic
I took in their feedback and focused a bit more on my products. I looked at them a bit more carefully and just wondered how I can improve them.
I went on to ask teacher for some advice and she told me to change the font to white and for the inside cover to possibly put in the lyrics, time of the songs and name of the people who helped produce the songs.
As you can see I listened to the feedback and changed the colour of the font and i placed it in the middle. That changed a lot, it made my lyrics much more visible.
As well as that I changed the font of the title and the size. Now my album cover looks more appealing and will certainly catch their attention.
what did the audience say about the new and improved front cover?
- looks really professional
- It really stands out
- The colour scheme is really effective
- The lyrics and title looks great
Here I listened to my teachers advice on putting the lyrics and the timings of the song and names who produced the songs. This was a really effective feedback as now it looks really efficient and looks like a really inside cover.
The other thing I added was the name of the song on the CD , the company logo and the copyright clerance
In my Advertisement I added the title of song again to cover that empty space and i used a drop shadow technique around the title and around the image of the album cover. As well as that I added a website at the bottom of the advertisement . This just enhanced my advertisement and made it look really efficient.
- Very appealing
- It looks real
- I like the way you used the different fonts