Our Learning
To understand how to effectively edit and improve our discursive texts.
question;
What do we want to achieve by the end of the session?
check out this short video about effective feedback. How does this apply to what we are doing today? ------->
Butterfly feedback
So, what do we need to do today to make our feedback just as effective?
Discuss. Do your ideas match up with our toolbox?
Toolbox
- Split into partners/threes
- Read one piece of work all together
- Discuss with your partner, what has this writer done well?
- what does this writer need to improve?
- write improvements on the work
(you can use arrows, asterisk's, change spellings or rewrite sections)
- move on to the second piece and repeat.
- try to spend around 10 minutes on each piece.