Literacy Narrative review #2

Small details

if you have a picture, do you have a caption?

is your picture centered in your text?

Think about your title

Maybe try an academic title:

something short and cool to the left

a colon

something more specific

Hanging in a Magic Treehouse: An Analysis of My Literacy History

Naked this

Search for "this"

This is the reason I like to read.

This moment is the reason I like to read.

Delete unneeded words

just

really

very

adverbs-- ex: personally

She quickly ran

She sprinted

often these words don't do a thing

Commas after conjunctions

search for 'and'

Read to the left of the 'and' / read to the right of 'and'

Both full sentences?

drop a comma before 'and'

I went to the store, and I bought a sweater

Do the same thing for 'but'