Your customers are eye researchers, scientists, and research technicians
They are looking for better ways to test different species' eyes
The test subjects, or models, provide results that can help scientists find answers used to help people see better and even cure eye diseases
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You sell products that help scientists examine the insides of eyes
Your products don't cater to scientists looking at exterior parts of the eye
However, the whole eye is still very important and all parts should be considered
You focus on the internal structures within eyes
All this leads us to...
Hence, your current mission statement
Our technology is designed and developed to accelerate your discovery in sightTM.
I'll come back to this in a bit.
I did some additional research
Diagram of the eye
What I learned
There's a lot going on in there
The iris is only one small piece of the puzzle
The Vitreus body is a lot of 'white' space
Whereas what wraps around are several interconnected tissues
Major parts include the lens, vitreous body, cornea, and optic nerve
Hyaloid canal runs through the vitreous body
So, to your points
The eye is made up of many intracellular structures and nerve bundles
Scientists could benefit greatly from a device that will help them see these microscopic details
The work you do will truly help scientists discover the ways in which the eye is a special portal into the body and brain
Now for the fun part
The Transformation
A closer look at the current logo
We've been through this. But what about this version?
Full contrast, reversed out White on Black.
Let's take a closer look at the first letter, O, with the cross-section in it
So far so good...
Just for kicks, let's make the background all white
We're getting somewhere. Kinda looks like a Q. Already it is simpler.
Give it a slight tilt and chop off the tail
I realize it symbolized the optical nerve but in this context it wasn't helping with readability
Let's compare
The new element is simpler
It now looks like a capital O, instead of a Q inside a circle
Still a diagram of the cross-section of an eye
And with a little refinement...
Logo breakdown
It's a capital O, for OcuScience
It is a simplified cross-section of the eye: lens & vitreous body in white, and shell, cornea/anterior chamber in black
It symbolizes the whole eye as your main focus
It really pops when reversed out, too!
But wait, there's more!
The icon is great, but what about our name?
Lucky for us, things come together perfectly.
Hey, it's the new logo, right there in the name! Brilliant!
Altogether now.
An icon for use at any size
A wordmark incorporating the icon for use in horizontal spaces, and anywhere else appropriate to bring recognition to your name.
And again things really pop when reversed out
But something still seems missing...
Icon: check
Wordmark: check
Something to tie everything together: ?????????
We need a tagline
But don't we already have one?
We do, and it's great! But...
Discovery in sight.
It is 95% there
It has a 'what': sight
It has a 'where': in
It has Discovery, a great word
It's still missing something
Let's breakdown other great tag lines:
Just do it.
So you can.
Save money. Live better.
Open happiness.
More saving. More doing.
Think different
Got milk?
The common link:
Action
Do
Save
Got
Think
Open
Discovery in sight
We need an action
Discovery is also a rather big word
And Discovery and Sight are kind of general
We need a way to be slightly more specific, use smaller, more concise words, and somehow trigger an action from customers
Oh, and wouldn't it be great if it wasn't just tacked on to the logo, but purposely placed somewhere to add meaning to the overall symbolic nature of the icon?
Get ready...
Get inside eyes.
Three simple words
The first, an action
Next, the 'where'
Lastly, the 'what'
Double meanings
Literally, get inside of eyes
A play on the phrase, "get an inside look" or "Get eyes on the inside"
Placement of the tag line
It visually represents the Hyaloid canal that runs through the Vitreous Body
Icon and wordmark with taglines
Reversed icon and wordmark with taglines
One final comparison
Old
New
To sum up the new logo
Stays consistent, just refines main components of old logo
Simplifies the number of elements to call more attention to the eye as one whole
Straightforward language that tells customers how they can benefit from your product
Unifies all elements (icon, wordmark, tagline) into cross-section of the eye
OcuScience help scientists, eye researchers, research technicians, and other pre-clinical researchers
Get inside eyes
with new technology that is designed and developed to accelerate their discovery in sight.
Note:
If you feel this is a great solution, but want to make minor tweaks, that is absolutely no problem.
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