This was my first job
This was my boss
The Greatest Sales Deck I’ve Ever Seen
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For Startups, the Power of “Why Now”
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Stories are about tension
Our expectations were upended when...
...so because of that, this happened
Simple story frameworks
Marketing consultant Andy Raskin created this five-part pitch to help businesses create better sales deck. I liked it so much, I created a Star Wars based summary of Raskin's framework.
UX researcher Amy Rogers writes about Kishōtenketsu, a four-stage narrative structure from Japan with roots in classical Chinese poetry.
AIDA is the oldest trick in a copywriter's toolbelt.
It's also an easy way to subdivide a piece of content for maximum influence.
Let's workshop our stories
Example of a UX research summary slide
Name the enemy
...and give it teeth
Why now?
Show the promised land
Renovated version (same info, clearer story)
Identify obstacles (and how to overcome them)
Provide evidence
Why now?
Promised land
Obstacles / Evidence
Write out each sentence on a separate line. Instead of a continuous snake of sentences, start with a vertical list.
When you stack your sentences in a column, they become easier to see and move around.
This line-by-line approach can bring clarity to your writing.
ShopEZ is an emerging ecommerce platform
We did usability testing, surveys, Google analytics review
Their current checkout experience has high cart abandonment
There is confusing navigation between checkout steps
We evaluated their entire checkout flow
Lack of payment options
No guest checkout options
The task completion rate was 60%
Shipping costs too high
Lack of payment options
To rectify this we can simplify the checkout
Build in more transparency for shipping costs
Increase payment options
Implement guest checkout
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