Our Learning

To understand how to effectively edit and improve our discursive texts.

question;

What do we want to achieve by the end of the session?

check out this short video about effective feedback. How does this apply to what we are doing today? ------->

Butterfly feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqh1MRWZjms

So, what do we need to do today to make our feedback just as effective?

Discuss. Do your ideas match up with our toolbox?

Toolbox

- Split into partners/threes

- Read one piece of work all together

- Discuss with your partner, what has this writer done well?

- what does this writer need to improve?

- write improvements on the work

(you can use arrows, asterisk's, change spellings  or rewrite sections)

- move on to the second piece and repeat.

- try to spend around 10 minutes on each piece.