English 1221

Tuesday February 3, 2014

Plan for today

Watch a short video introduction to Synthesis.

Look at notes related to the Mauk and Hacker/Sommers readings.

Think a little more about how Devoss et al. and Brandt converge or diverge (in other words, how can we usefully "synthesize" their ideas or arguments?).

Note: Don't forget to submit your Critical Analysis of Devoss et al. by 11:59pm tonight (Tues. 2/5)

Introduction to Synthesis

Locate the Synthesis handout on Moodle. Watch the Video.

Mauk 'Applying a Concept'


Working with sources is the activity that best characterizes the work of the academic writer. It is simply not enough for us to tell folks what we think, we must ground our ideas in the conversations that are already taking place on our topic.

Mauk gives us two ways to think about sources:
Supportive
Vital

Supportive Sources


This is your standard, run-of-the-mill use of another author's work. To "support" or "prove" or emphasize your own ideas.

These kinds of sources have 3 benefits:
They make our arguments stronger via their authority.
They add richness/complexity.
They connect us to specific conversations.

Vital Sources


Vital sources are something new, but they are very useful. Essentially, this is an approach to working with text that sees us rely heavily on an author, text, or concept. Functionally, their ideas become the backbone of our own project. 

Check out Mauk's example. Avatar is a terrible movie but the example is a solid one. Campbell is the engine that drives Smith's project. She wouldn't have an argument without Campbell.

As you start working with synthesis, try to determine if one idea from the text (literacy, maybe) could worl similarly.

Steps for working with vital sources

Basically, invest the time to get their ideas right. 

Later in the chapter, Mauk calls this the "long buildup" (65) where an author really spends significant time explaining another author's project or key terms (recall that one of our Brandt examples did this too). 

Strategy (54):
Summarize carefully
Explain how the source is valuable.
Weave its insights into your own thinking.

Mauk's tips for synthesis


Be clear and careful about how author's "relate" or "respond" to one another (note: very often they are not actually writing to one another; rather, you are putting their texts into conversation via synthesis).

Signal agreement with clear verbs: agrees, echoes, supports...
Signal disagreement: disagrees, challenges, resists...

Mauk offers 4 levels of agreement/disagreement (62-64).

Hacker/Sommers

58b: Signal Phrases

Use signal phrases to set up quotes and to create action in a text. Never drop a quote into a paper; you always need to include some kind of signal for the reader to understand who is speaking. Even something as simply as "Brandt explains..." will work.

Also use signal phrases to demonstrate action as authors:
Acknowledge, admit, argue, assert, claim, compare, contend, declare, deny, emphasize, explore, illustrate, insist, observe, reason, refute, report, respond, or suggest. 

Hacker/Sommers on SYnthesis


The goal of synthesis, again, is to generate conversations in your writing. Your reader needs to see you sources "speaking" to one another on the topic at hand. 

The trick here is (you guessed it) key terms: employ verbs (see the previous slide) and transitional statements to signal agreement and disagreement. 

The Hacker/Sommers example on 478 offers a great example. A well placed "however" makes all the difference for signaling a shift in the conversation.



For Next Tuesday 2/11


Read: Richard Rodriguez "The Achievement of Desire" (it's on Moodle) and think about Synthesis. How could we put Rodriguez into some kind of "conversation" with the other authors? 

Also read Chapter 4 of Mauk et al. on "Applying a Concept," this is another useful way of thinking about Synthesis.

There is no further work for the week!

Let me know if you have any questions.

English 1221

By Scott Rogers