When I showed my colleagues my Ancillary work they gave me some harsh feedback

• The title doesn't suit 
• Change the black font on the back cover
• The inside looks boring, put something in it
• The Advertisement looks unrealistic

I took in their feedback and focused a bit more on my products. I looked at them a bit more carefully and just wondered how I can improve them. 

I went on to ask teacher for some advice and she told me to change the font to white and for the inside cover to possibly put in the lyrics, time of the songs and name of the people who helped produce the songs.

In my Advertisement I added the title of song again to cover that empty space and i used a drop shadow technique around the title and around the image of the album cover. As well as that I added a website at the bottom of the advertisement . This just enhanced my advertisement and made it look really efficient.

• Very appealing
• It looks real 
• I like the way you used the different fonts